Thursday, May 15, 2008

kuch khwahishein aisi....

jaane kyon in nam si aankhon se,
kisi ko dhoondhne ki koshish karte hain.
ye to is qalb(dil) ka zor nahi chalta,
hum to azeem khwahish rakhte hain.

ghubar se bhara hai har manzar,
seene hai sabke yahan banzar.
fir bhi is banzar zameen par,
aasman ugane ki khwahish rakhte hain.

kaantein khilaye hai mohabbat ne kuch aise,
ab to girdhar gul se bhi darte hai.
kahin se hausala juta kar,
ek gulistan khilane ki khwahish rakhte hain.

khurram(khushi) nahi hai jindagi bhale hamari,
seeena tan ke jindagi se ladte hain.
khazalat(blessings) mile poori duniya ko,
bas ye choti si khwahish rakhte hain...
bas ye choti si khwahish rakhte hain.....
bas ye choti si khwahish rakhte hain.......

6 comments:

Ankur said...

hi brother

If i were to ask name for whom you wrote this poem it would take decade of struggle for you and i am sure still you would not be able to find answer!!!!!!

Anyways you have put your heart and many hours of thoughts out.

Keep writing more!!

amit said...

last lines are Just too good...
Gam ke bare me to bahut likha thodi 1 khushi wali bhi likh le..

Sourabh Girdhar said...

@Ankur
Dude this has not been written to address anyone. If you read my profile on blog, its written there that all the sad poems has no relation woth anyone living or dead.
Well thanks for coming.And if you think i wont find answer , I think its best for me .
I don't want anyone to ruin me so much.

Sourabh Girdhar said...

@Amit
Ya sure dude I will soon write some poem with happiness . :)

The thing is that generally what we listen/read as aprt of gazal/poem its sad only. and thats why even i lack some words to express joy/happiness.
Will try to write a good one..
Thanks .. :)

Varsha said...

amazing poem.. girdhar ji.. kya likhte ho, wah! kahan se seekhi itni urdu? I think tum jo sad songs sunte ho uska asar hai..

Sourabh Girdhar said...

@Varsha
Thanx
arey urdu to bas aise hi net se thodi bahut padh ke sekhi.. mainly jab jodha akbar dekhi uske baad interest hua tha urdu me to thodi bahut vocab badhai ...
han jo ye feelings hai ye sab sad songs se hi aati hai .. mainly gazlas suni kafi sar last 2-3 mahine me. to asar aa gaya hai...