Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Ye kya haal bana rakh hai humne

kitna dard chupa rakha hai humne..
Gam ko hamsafar bana rakha hai humne....
Aasman me hi udate hai hum...
Fir bhi hamsafar is dharti ko bana rakh hai humne....

Tumne kaha tha ki is mod par miloge..
Us mod ko hi thikaana bana rakha hai humne....
tum chale gaye je jin raho pe..
Un raho pe palko ko bicha rakha hai humne....

Jo kehta hai ki tumhe bhi hai mohabbat..
us parinde ko basheer bana rakha hai humne....
tum hi to jindagi ki nigaar..
tumhari tasveer ko aaina bana rakha hai humne....

is pyari si muskaan ke piche..
jaane kitni zahamat chupa rakhi hai humne....
tum kya jaano is roshan chaman me ..
kitne kaante khila rakhe hai humne....

tumhare ishq ne taj pehnaya tha hame..
Us taasir ko hi jaan bana rakha hai humne....
girdhar ke ishq ki inteha to dekho..
ab tak tumhe habeeb bana rakha hai humne....

tum bhool jao bhale hamein..
tumhe apni yaaddasht bana rakh ahi humne....
kabhi miloge to yahi kahoge humse..
Ye kya hal bana rakha hai humne.......
ye kya haal bana rakh hai humne.......

4 comments:

amit said...

leave this software job man.. ja ke bollywood join kar.. bahut paise kamayega....
:)

Sourabh Girdhar said...

@Amit
Arey kon kambakht paise ke liye likhta hai....
ham to likhte hai taki kuch jata sake...
ham to likhte hai taki thoda halka feel kar sake....

aur paiso ka kya karna hai tere pas to hai hi bahue sare :) , tere se le lunga jab chahiye honge....

Anusha said...

Extremely well written...almost made me write again...

On a lighter note..
Yeh kya haal bana rakha hai tumne..
Kuch lete kyun nahi...
Coldarin li?? :-D

Sourabh Girdhar said...

@ANUSHA Thanks for coming.. :)

arey aapko pata hai ki le le ki to yahi haal ho gaya hai :) :D

aur lene ki mat kaho yaar warna www ka space kam pad jayega ... :)

aur aapki poem padhi maine lagta hai ek ek line ka perfect jawab diya hai :)